here you go mania lol. i finished it for you
so i spent a little while working on this before i realized it sounds way too much like "Ministy Of Lost Souls" by Dream Theater. But i decided to post what i have anyway, just because i did put a lot of effort into it
Back to a more metalcore-y style. its been awhile since ive posted, and this isnt that great but whatever lol
i think this is basically all my styles together. its got a metalcoreish feel to it, but has a very djent way of doing the breakdowns, it has an epic solo, and a melodic interlude with some tapping.
im kinda stuck. looking for advice on where to go from here
just short little acoustic atmospheric thingy
yupps. heres another song lol. I actully used palm mutes this time lol. My first attempt at writing lyrics! :D Lyrics: (verse 1) We had it perfect, I knew your secrets, Every one of them the dirty ones, youd never told, no one knew more then me, I gave my everything, to make you happy, no more tears, it brought me down, id never felt so fucking bad, (post-verse)You lied, to me, you fucking, lied to me (Pre-Chorus) And I fell for you, with all my heart, said all the things no one would say, to make you happy, And I fell for you, with all my heart, said all the things no one would say, to make you happy (Chorus) and never again will i be fooled, by your selfish lies, it tore me up inside, Not worth the tears you cried, (Post- Chorus)and never again will i be fooled, (You've betrayed me)by your selfish lies, it tore me up inside, (I'm Givin' up on you) Not worth the tears you cried, (verse 2) You talk to me, like nothing ever happend, Pretending it was all, just a dream, (verse 3) You flirt with me, then with my best friend, Don't you remember, your just a fat fucking whore, thats what they called you, i never said that shit to you, it was always,"your beautiful" You fat fucking whore, (post verse)You lied, to me, you fucking, lied to me (Breakdown A) And in my dreams, I see you with me, and when i wake up, I see you with him (Pre-Chorus) (Chorus) (Post-Chorus) (Interlude) your still in my dreams! (Bridge) But I must move on, No more lingering, these memories are in the past, No more lies, and no more feelings, I've had enough, of all your games, Our friends, they warned me, I didnt listen, (transistion) I SHOULD HAVE LISTENED! (Pre- Chorus) (chorus) (post Chorus) (Outro)You lied, to me, you fucking, lied to me You lied, to me, you fucking, lied to me