The intro of this is the outro of 'If all but life survives' so it is actually properly connected. I've finished the first pre-chorus of the song and I've not used the other instruments as much yet. Just want to see what its like so far.
I actuall got around to changing this. Even though I got good feedback the last time I posted this, the ending was still eating away at me as it didn't fit the song so I added another one of those 3 chord progressions I've gotten into lately. Hope its alright.
Mnay of you may remember the starting rhythm of this. I started the song fromscratch and finished it. Hope you enjoy it guys. On a side note. Would you mind putting down what you think my best songs are, just so I can send them to my band and actually record them.
I've added more string ensemble and choir into places of the song. I have also changed the chorus. It doesn't sound like the rest of the song and I don't know if that ruins it. I've also added some heavy riffs after the first solo. Enjoy guys.