This song was inspired by a funky tune that my marching band mate came up with on the vibraphone, and I couldn't resist the temptation to write a song with it! I hope you guys like it!
So I took the comments and criticism given by my peers on this website and wrote a what I like to think of as a masterpiece xD A little cocky but I really think that every time I have said on here that, "This is the best song I ever wrote!", is utter bull compared to what I have finished writing today. I don't know if this is the best song that I will ever write, but I think it's safe to say that it will definitely stay in the top 10 for a very long time.
I've gotten some very good reviews on the song here without vocals, so I think I will get even better reviews with this one! I'm really excited to see what you guys think!
Justice is driven by the populous of the human race. Giving their faith and loyalty to the divine, the forsaken who are willing fight against the evils and and demonic powers of the devil and his minions. Countless of innocent and braves souls were lost to these inhumane abominations. But through the faith and willpower of humanity, the bright and warm-hearted warriors overcome all desires to cower in fear, and rise up against the death stricken slaves of sin. Critique my song writing as wells as my lyrics. On a side note I have never legitimately written song lyrics before, but I feel as though these lyrics, even though written in story form, are well suited to the style and emotion from the song that I have written.
An original with lots of sick ass riffs and licks. Very groovy. Comment Rate and Critique please!
Probably one of my most favorite songs that I've written. It was so much fun creating and writing this song and I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I do! Comment Rate and Critique!
This song is a melodic heavy medal song, and as well as the first song that I've written with a guitar solo. The solo is very dramatic. The song is supposed to be heard as a song written for someone going through many obstacles and adventures and during the end it turns to the person who has been rescued and his/her emotions written through song. Hopefully you listeners can interpret this as well. Might not be perfect but I put a lot of time into this. Comments rating and critique are appreciated.
Probably one of the best songs I've ever written. Very organized and uplifting, while still having that heavy metal aspect. Please comment rate and critique!! `Zzslayr
A song I whipped up in about 4 hours of full on dedicated work. A pretty nice song with some weird transitions but it all comes together in the end! Please comment rate and critique!
This song is one of my slower songs, still a moderate tempo though. This song is more organized than my other songs which I think the listener will like and if you wait until the very end (which I suggest you listen to the whole song) you get to hear one of the grooviest riffs I have ever written. :D Please comment critique and rate!