Well, here's the lick I came up with a couple of months ago, plus some stuff I came up while fiddling with my acoustic(Palm mutes are freaking psychotically good on acoustics, btw). I had to leave out the chord sections though -_-' But please, rate and comment. I'm always open to suggestions and (helpful) criticism.. and Opinions tew :P
Well guys, this is the first thing that I've created in awhile that has any potential whatsoever... It get's sort of jazz influenced at the end, but it's not fully formulated. Please check it out and rate, tell me what you think, or if you have any pointers.
Here's an awesome song by an awesome band. It's pretty brutal, and the lyrics are in the comments area of the properties section. The end of the song is a breakdown, so just follow the drums with an open E and A, and you've got it. Check 'em out.
Well, Here she is... please check it out and rate... And as always, Criticism is welcome. Props to ROXguitarist19 for the main riff, minus the cooldown at the end of the riff, and for getting the song together. This doesn't have the drums, and I'm thinking of getting my friend to add some synth to it, but I'll have to see the band first, that and get the total number of guitarists down, which were contemplating maybe three, but two is good too. Anyway, please listen, rate, and/or criticize
Hey guys, here's my updates on the song so far. It's just the guitar parts, but it's really stating to shape up I believe. I've worked on the smoothness, Please feel free to comment, criticize, and rate.
Here you go bro, thanks for all of your help. It's not done, but here's whats changed so far, and much for the better, especially considering what it sounded like at first o.0 Anyway, Check It Out Guys, and please rate! :O
For RoxGuitarist: Heres the basic idea, but I don't know how to formulate the basic transitions, and the rest of the song hasn't formulated yet... This is slightly revised from the total original though... Think smart brutality, you know, Its not just a total megabreakdownfest, but beautiful underneath ya? That's where I was going with it, but I got derailed at the concept stage the first time.. The last part is what I was thinking about for the vocals..
This is my first thingy, but so far this is all I have. It's only the intro, and part of the first verse, but I plan on finishing it. Ummm, please rate and leave some constructive criticism, I would love to have more experienced help so I can better my writing skillz, especially rhythm guitar parts.