Tabs in pop!

re-uploaded

New song I wrote based around my friend's lyrics again. It's another breakup song, but more upbeat in the chorus. The transitions proved to be difficult between parts, so let me know if I need to rework them. A bit long winded, but here it is!

http://youtu.be/-sTPKiIaVxM For the better version of LOUD SOUNDS - 2 go to that address or just look under Giea Prince! thanks! Please comment on one or the other! (Here are all the URL's to all of my other songs I've posted - or you can just look up Giea Prince:) http://youtu.be/ADQv9642wyI - Space Whales http://youtu.be/c8fS4LqsNtM - Rise For the Fallen http://youtu.be/URTZbtDK_Ng - Contemplation http://youtu.be/XQYZaABdrzw - Yeah Boy http://youtu.be/qIomIqo9G8Y - Restoration of Glory http://youtu.be/g2Wkr2klWR8 - ?????? ????? - Loud Sounds http://youtu.be/-sTPKiIaVxM - ?????? ????? - 2

A new version of this... Is it better?

written and built up from a bassline (as usual), understated guitar (as usual), monotonic/improvable drums (as usual) and (as usual) a nice melody. ;-)

This is the third and final instalment of Dolphins of fire unless I decide to change it. I'm happy with it and I hope you guys will be too. I would really like some feed back so I can improve with my next song. Hope you guys like it.

I have just finished this song, or make it listenable, but it stays some defects

Here is the 2nd instalment of my song. It might be the last but I'm not sure about the intro part. I'm very happy with this song even though it is a bit repudiative. I would really like some feedback so i can improve the song. If anyone wants to change something that would also be great. I hope you like it

This is a song I've been working on for a few days but it's not done yet. The song is a bit repetitive but I like where its going. If anyone has any advice that would be great

Another wich is not finished, but I work on it!