I made an orchestal version of my song... Enjoy! =)
Song idea I came up with on guitar, it just kept getting bigger and bigger. It feels like it's missing something and I could use some help trying to figure that out.
this is a older instrumental by me, but i dont thing alot of you guy hear it beford. Anyway wrote lyrics to it tonight. The story of this lyrics that i when troule a brake up not long ago and this is me put that brake up to rest (Verse 1) This is the last night, of our life, of the time we had. Yes that right, It is time, that our love die tonight. Dont you see?what i meanty,Why stay here and bleed. I Dont want you to leave, but i need you to promise me. (Chores) That you will walk away, You will never see me aging. That you wont forget me, No matter how strough your pain. This is it i move on, I never writte you a song. This is the last one. I hope that you will go on. (verse 2) Dont cry me a river i will drowned in your river. maybe this is for the best, and we both what is the rest. This is not what i plane!! I didn't want it to end!! But you were never there. Why should i fight to see my girlfriend!! (chores) That you will walk away, You will never see me aging. That you wont forget me, No matter how strough your pain. This is it i move on, I never writte you a song. This is the last one. I hope that you will go on. (Briged 2) This is my finole goodbye!! (chores) That you will walk away, You will never see me aging. That you wont forget me, No matter how strough your pain. This is it i move on, I never writte you a song. This is the last one. I hope that you will go on. (outro) My finile goodbye (This is the end i move on)
This song has got every element of song writing I have ever used. Clean, heavy, djent, melodic, its all there. Enjoy ;) Additional: If anyone wants to, they can add other parts to what I've got. I gonna take every part and make them into one song.
This is another part. a little different.
This is a funky folk rock song with some grunge elements... a few details about my song: difficulty: Intermediate, Tempo 75-100, duration: +/- 15 min. I hope you like my song! =) (I deleted all versions except this one, this should be the final version... but if someone see a mistake, please comment, so I can fix it... ;-)
Well, here's the lick I came up with a couple of months ago, plus some stuff I came up while fiddling with my acoustic(Palm mutes are freaking psychotically good on acoustics, btw). I had to leave out the chord sections though -_-' But please, rate and comment. I'm always open to suggestions and (helpful) criticism.. and Opinions tew :P