Tabs in metal!

I just want to post what I've got at the moment. However I want some ideas for a chorus that don't follow the kirisute gomen style.

The japanese title stands for Deaths gate. Ignore the bit at the end. I'm still trying to think of a verse for this song. I know its hung up on tremelo but it sound properly heavy.

After 4 1/2 hours of work, I've managed to overcome my writer's block, so I took that frustration and put it to music. Probably one of my heaviest songs to date and most interesting (being metal and orchestral), so please comment and rate amigos!

I reduced some of the riff timings to make the song shorter. I think thats about it for this song.

The song may need a few tweaks here and there, but all things considered its good. I added two more solos and a 'Becoming the Dragon' influenced ending. So one more track and the albums finished.

I changed the drum feel AGAIN. Hope it does the job this time. I also added another riff. And the drums are different to my delight.

Removed the solo and slowed the feel down (Hopefully) I also added in chainsaw's part after the slowed feel and then moved on to a different riff and added the solo in. I do think however the drums are starting to get repetative

I edited some of the stuff chainsaw added, mainly to keep the songs feel flowing and I added a solo. Not my best but still alright

I guess this shows Metallica's influence on me.

Got a good riff going but nothing to follow it. Just need to know if its worth continuing or if anything can be done to improve this section