Tabs in metal!

demo

Another one of my older songs. Would love some constructive critisism (: Btw: I would like to thank the people who commented my other 2 songs as your comments has helped me a lot in my later stuff :)

Its finished. Got a good solo and breakdown. Enjoy. :)

The chorus is pretty simplistic but it sounds pretty good (If I do say so my self) Need some advice on where to go. Go down the dark route or should I go acoustic?

This song will need work. But I would like some comments on what I got so far.

I've already posted this track. However I changed the tuning on it and it actually sounds better than the other version of it.

I edited the drum beat. I changed it from minims to crotchets (1/2 to 1/4) So the drum beats slightly more invloved but going any faster or more complex may ruin the songs feel. The lead may have to be changed when it comes in as well. But its good none-the-less

Here's the finished version of Shibo Geito with the outro leading into the final track.

This is the albums ending track. Its better put together than the opening track. (My opinion) Any advice on improvements will be a big help.

I have put in a chorus with slower version of the pre-chorus and moved on to the breakdown and solo. Hope its alright guys