Tabs in metal!

I've been getting panic attacks off and on the previous month and they're not fucking pretty. It's not done, but here's a musical representation of what I feel during an episode. It's not meant to sound great at parts because it's meant to demonstrate the nature of the attacks. comment and rate:)

I got inspired by an article about a prom night dumpster baby

This is an instrumental song.

This is something i add on my song.

this is a good song but i don't know for the part. cause i can remove it or keep it like that. Can tell me please?

Hodgepodge. Please critique.

I changed the name. (I managed to incorporate Dubs suggestion into it) I've added the chorus, solo and outro (The harmonies have returned) It fades away nicely too. Hope you enjoy guys.

This needs more work done. I've got riffs for later in the song but at the moment this bit needs attention. It needs to be neatened up. Thats where you guys come in. Usual critisms welcome. (As a side-note: Has any one got any better names for this song? Base it on what you listen to here)

Just Rock Out!!! - Grim

I think the song has turned out quite well. I've put in the solo and finished the song off. Hope you guys enjoy.