Tabs in jackson!

This is a song I wrote by myself(Age:15). This song, I am really proud of because of its lenght!! plz rate and comment If you love, like or HATE it! If you like this then go look at my other songs! :D (all is playable on real guitar and bass!! (youtube account: Acer993)

This song is a song I made up by myself ( I am 15 years old). It is ALL playable on real guitar and on bass(I dont know drums)! Please comment if you like or dislike it and rate! I want to make it in a music career so plz tell me if it sucks or what i need to get better at. :)