Tabs in full band!

I tried to make a good metal version of the main parts of the "Starwars Song". Almost everything is perfect. There is one part that is not quite timed right. If anyone has some suggestions on correcting this, please comment.

This is a fairly simple song that i wrote in an hour and a half. please comment.

this is a song that i previously posted. I added both bass and drums that i wrote myself. tell me what you think.