Tabs in Rock!

This song was my first upload on the site, but I revamped the song by adding a sweet solo at the end and created a simple piano part. I got rid of bass and kept the cello and mastered the sound levels. Probably my most emotional, heartfelt song ever, so please give me some feedback!

Not quite finished yet. The choruses are the most developed part. This one is really starting to shape up to be good. Very blink 182-esque, but with my own style. Any comment is much appreciated.

This is something i add on my song.

this is a good song but i don't know for the part. cause i can remove it or keep it like that. Can tell me please?

Just Rock Out!!! - Grim

And another new one.....This Song is a ballade with a vocal part which is played by a cello..... the lyrics are about lonelyness.....

Hey, Guys after a few moths break i wrote a new song... its a rock song with evil elements but also very harmonic....i´d like to know your opinion about it! so.... rates and comments are very welcome.... Influence: AC/DC,Scorpions,Linkin Park

Enjoy... - Grim

Bon App?tit! This is its absolute finish. I made it sound more complete, and that's about it; it shouldn't contain any surprises. Btw, I do not know which genre this falls, but I have narrowed it down between two.

I decided to change my mind. I wasn't going to post anymore songs up, but y'all are amazing critics, and are very encouraging. Here goes my latest piece. I hope it is a pleasant surprise to all of you. :) And I added drums!!! But I'm not sure if they're good or not. :/