Tabs in Funk!

I've been meaning to write this in Tux for quite some time now, but never got around to it. A while back my best friend got fucked over bad by this one girl and he wrote lyrics about it months ago. He gave me a copy of his lyrics (I can post it on Facebook if anyone's interested) (they're unfinished) and I took it and wrote a whole song around it including a decent vocal line. It's a breakup song, but I tried to make it beaty and sound uplifting (which is ironic none-the-less) Anyways, here's the song. Comment and critique as always:p

I am proud to say I am finished this song. It is my first non-pop song so I am really happy. Please give me some advice for my next songs. Thanks

This is my first non pop song so this has been an enjoyable experience for me. It is done for now but there is still isn't perfect so any advice from you guys would be brilliant. I've learnt a lot from writing this song so please tell me what I should improve on so I can get the most out of the song. Thanks

This is my first song That I have written that isn't pop. So please excuse my mistakes. It's not done yet and is still very repetitive. All I want is some advice for what to do with it.

Hey Tux Community - here is maybe the best worst song ever written it's very strange but... interesting I sat down about 2 hours ago and was real upset and so I wrote this to calm me down haha enjoy!!! - The Giea Prince

Hey guys I came up with the basic bass riff a couple weeks ago with a friend and I turned it into an intense funk song. The sytle is Red Hot Chilli Peppers inspired and FULL of alto sax and distortion lead; it took about two days to write everything. It's about a super hot girl walking down the street and all the guys turn their head toward her in slow motion and their jaws drop haha. I think this is one of my best songs I've ever written, so please listen and let me know if you like it. Here's a link to the song on YouTube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wau6TA3uLno&feature=youtu.be

I wrote this a couple weeks ago and forgot to upload it. Decided to write my third funk song similar to Feelin So High. It has guitar and sax lead mainly utilizing the Mixolydian mode with a cool key change at the end.

this is one of the first songs, that i've make with tuxguitar... i don't know what genr it is... maybe funk

This song was based on one of my first uploads to this site, so I decided to rewrite the song, so it sounded better. It's only the second song I've written with a horn section, so take a listen!

This is a funky folk rock song with some grunge elements... a few details about my song: difficulty: Intermediate, Tempo 75-100, duration: +/- 15 min. I hope you like my song! =) (I deleted all versions except this one, this should be the final version... but if someone see a mistake, please comment, so I can fix it... ;-)