Ok well it Tell me why but i did what rox said and the briged A play once and the briend in chores 3 play once and i writting lyrics for it so rate and comment (Lyrics)You so beautiful, I don’t belong here no. I ask my safe why. Where do I go wrought? He so funny, he is not me, why can’t I not be, what you’re looking for? Time and time aging, I end in last place. I just want to be your friend. I’m starting to have too many of them. All if those ass hold, always get what they want. And then the nice guy has nothing left. (Chores) Tell me why. Is it I’m Trying too hard or not trying at all? Cause it seem like everyone else always get who they want. Is there something about me? I just cannot see. What it is I’m doing wrought. (Verse) No you won't look at me. You won't even see. Just like everyone else you don’t care at all. What did I expiated is just natural, it is my fault. Everyone annoying me, they just pick on me, because I don’t have anyone, it staring to get to me. What is it that I don’t see? And no one wants to help me. (Chores) Tell me why. Is it I’m Trying too hard or not trying at all? Cause it seem like everyone else always get who they want. Is there something about me? I just cannot see. What it is I’m doing wrought. (Bridged C) I am in last place. I am too late. I don’t understand I don’t have any change. He is so funny!! He is not me!! That what she looking for!! (Verse) So what now? I have to give now. It is always the same thing. I`m am always in last place. I just want to be friend. That what they all say, Just leave me alone. (Chores) Tell me why. Is it I’m Trying too hard or not trying at all? Cause it seem like everyone else always get who they want. Is there something about me? I just cannot see. What it is I’m doing wrought.
I like this new breakdown a lot but maybe the strings get piercing. I don't think they do but that's my opinion.
I made this while I was stoned I guess, dont know^^
First song ive written. short sweet an noobtastic. Please rate/comment!
Here, coyotes are instinctive hunters, and they'll follow no one but a prey. Their leader is such a freaky hunter, that he'll behave like a prey in order to bring his horde to follow him. In the story I'll attempt to write, the leader will get his horde to follow him to the other side, in the fashion described above.
This is my first upload, and my first deviation I actually wanted to have finished. It's not entirely great, but what can you expect from a newbie? Inspired by Philip Wesley's "The Approaching Night"
No solos, gonna let my guitarists write those. Please comment!
Here you go ROX, see if there's anything worth using.
Well Kieran I finally made it. Took a while but that's mainly because I forgot about it x.x anyway tell me what you think.
Im pretty new to both songrwiting and tux...but tell me whatcha think!