Its a good song but theres two flaws that I really noticed. One the solo: Some of the notes were off key and that took away from the epicness plus the bends didn't stay within the scale either. And secondly: The song lacked that oomph if you get what I mean. It didn't have much momentumn. This may be down to the drums not being as lively as they could be or down to the riffs themselves, I'm not sure. Either way its good but its not great.
Everything's great until the solo. There are only a few notes not within the scale, but I felt the solo lacked a climax and the drums should be heavier and more prominent. Fix those those issues and you've got a pretty good song.
this was really cool man. Only thing for me is it felt it never really exploded the way I expected from the first riffs, but maybe that was the point; undulating restlessly under the surface of energetic threshold that is heavy music. but hey, cool shit man. i liked the solo, agree wit Dub on the drums