Its great man. A very nice song with an excellent lead. I would suggest boosting the rhythm guitar so it can be heard better but apart from that, there's not much else. Can't wait to hear more from you.
A good much needed improvement. The new age sound in the beginning is my favorite because it complements your heavy structured sound after. Great lead, but turn the rhythm up as Mania said. Try to add more cymbal at the end to bring a climax to your epic solo at the end, but other than that it is a very good song.
Wow thanks guys. Every song on my profile here was made by me.
And on a side note, a year ago I severed 2 tendons and a nerve in my left hand pinky with a knife by accident. I can KIND OF play guitar but not very well, so now I just write songs for my friends to learn.
I'm considering taking drum lessons for a few weeks and then just learning for myself once I get the basics down.
Also, this song sounds WAY more epic with good headphones.
I think that the actual song could (I ain't sure though) be improved by turning the long notes of the rythm guitar into some rythmic pattern with perhaps palm muting and stuff.