The song loaded well. The music is good, but the lyrics are probably censored. It's speaks about the heart, crying and stuff like that, but I'm sure there's a lot more to it ;o)
For some reason, it didn't properly load on the site, but the download works thankfully. nice tune and in my opinion, much better lead than your other song:) For the vocals, I would rather use violin because cello is more of bass instrument (not good for vocals in my opinion) violin has a higher timbre thus more suitable.
I mean that when a rocker says "heart, crying, and stuff like that" in his song, he wants to make it short, cause the real thing probably includes beer, sex and paying bills. I think that some well found anecdotes could have added concrete to it :)
if i would mean beer, sex etc. i would write it...but i really mean heart, crying, pain, lonelyness etc. you can see the exactly lyrics if you download it or if you click on the ´´tuxguitar online´´ button