I got lost in y'all's song. It might be because I just took 40 mg of Ritalin (I'm supposed to be only taking 10 mg, but I forgot to take my medicine a couple of days in a row, experimented, my experience right now is quite unique); basically, I think it sounded great. I like how you dropped the tuning by one step and into drop C. Sounds like you have a good band put together. I bet y'all's strings are like super loose, though, especially that bass's. I'm not a good critic in this genre, so I have no suggestions. Wow...