I've added more string ensemble and choir into places of the song. I have also changed the chorus. It doesn't sound like the rest of the song and I don't know if that ruins it. I've also added some heavy riffs after the first solo. Enjoy guys.
See? see how much more richer the music sounds? I love the different sections of the song especially that reoccurring theme from the intro and the lead scattered throughout the song. It definitely brings the sections together. I love every aspect of this; well written and full of surprises; and that piano part gives me the chills every time. Great job!