In the Wake of Death TuxGuitar tablature

I liked the beginning a lot especially when the piano came in, although I was expecting those unusual instruments to stick with the premise of the song. I think you should at least incorporate a slight variation of your intro into your main heavy melody later on within the song. For you intro try adding some orchestral hits (use ensemble instrument) and add some light dissonant strings and possibly incorporate those elements into the song.

Well as you know man this isn't my usual way of writing. But thanks for the advice, all the same. I'll try to act on it.

Pretty good man, I like how you made the piano in the song