GOOD! this is awesome, the only riff segment that repeats too much is the measure 27 riff after the first solo, but I like the lead because it makes it less repetitive and a lot more interesting. I wasn't crazy about the lead in m.68, but it's a taste you have to develop I guess. And your song as it is is 3:02. If you add and switch stuff up you could take out some repeats. Remember it doesn't have to be a 5 minute song, It's the creativity that counts.
I don't know if it's because I was more enthusiasm yesterday, but today's version seems to have lost of its energy. I repeats too often. And yesterday I heard, (or I think I did hear) a really crazy solo accompanied with simultaneous drum. Today, it seems to have been tweaked. I should have downloaded it.
Ok! I'm a little ashamed of my error, I just noticed I had used the wrong soundbank, this explains why I couldn't appreciate the song as well as yesterday.
Ok I've gotten some rest, and then listened to it again and here's my comment: As good as it should! If you worry because of my earlier comment, just consider 39-42, make it repeat x2 instead of x3. Unless you have something else in mind for it, like adding some guit to it or vox. Cheer, everything's ok, I was wrong.
i feel it's getting progressively worse but it's still good. It's losing the genuine heaviness that you had in the beginning. It's becoming the more generalized idea of heavy and losing that creepy heavy feeling.