I finally managed to take a glimpse at your tablature, and found an alternative to the rythm guit played while the bend and release. Of course, you'll need to adjust em' according to the new rythm guit:
that bend works well, right? this is good stuff man but idk about that intro to track 10. Unless you are going for that whole "organized chaos" idea it seems like it will be a bad closer.
I assure you that the tune is cool, but these bends make me wonder.
The bend and release is not the problem, it's the notes, they are out of place, you have to replace it so that it'll fit: C#minor, A major, C#minor, D major.