Track 6-Fall TuxGuitar tablature
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Well here it is the finished version. The drums are repetative. Literaly.The same rhythm throughout but its the only one that would fit. The solo isn't my best but it's still good. And the pre-chorus does need something added to it to male it better but apart from that its a good song and ends strongly.
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Well found! Some special lyrics upon it would make it famous.
I really like it, mania.
i think it's solid. nothing amazing but it's good. like Re said, this needs some good vox. But I say that the vox will make or break the song. It will either keep this in the average zone or turn this into a great song.
good rock jam. solid, strong leads, be great if the drums were jazzed up a bit ;) but good work man.
Shure, I advise you taking a full time month writing the lyrics. Write until you've filled at leat 5 pages of rimes, and then put it together as tight as possible.
I would however I cannot write lyrics. I know, I've tried. So, unless I learn, this song will be average.
it's not so much lyrics as you need a vocal melody. Basically just hum a line to yourself while listening to this, tab it down, and write the lyrics to correspond with the melody.
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