i took some advice from Rox and used an odd key... i ended up using C# Jewish... i also took some advice from Hydralacaust and the whole bridge of the song is in 5/8ths and also during the pre-chorus i used the type of strange chords i think he'd use... all in all its a pretty good song and its not TOO generic so... rate and comment (especially Rox And Hydralacaust)