My best song so far and i know it. This means alot to me tbh :L it's about that girl who you could never get. Please Listen i think you would enjoy :) And Rate And Comment! :)
9/10 this is a VERY nice song. I have a few suggestion, however, I liked the riffs/solos at the end, but try to incorporate part of the melody into maybe your next solo, as to relate it to the chorus. I wouldn't normally do this, but since this sounds like a melodic song, I think you should base part of it of the vocal melody (if you did already I apologize) A few transitions could be better(measure 61 and 101). Add stings in the beginning of the song! they'll blend in nicely with the acoustic guitar. I didn't like the strings in 69 cause I felt it was randomly put there (because you didn't add it afterwards which was what disappointed me.) If not for those thing this would be 10/10. You should also add a piano breakdown and jump right in with the chorus for an extra level of power!