I don't know. The strings are a bit piercing but also, What I wanted from the song was basically a band feel. So a band could pick up this tab and play the song. The strings sort of alter that feel a bit. Not only that but they don't match the tone of the song very well. That said, it's not a bad idea but it doesn't really fit the song. What I could do is put the strings notes on the Rhythm guitar if that'll sound alright, after all this is as much your song as mine.
I don't want credit dude. It's your song. And ok, that's cool. I actually wasn't gunna use strings intially, I was gunna use high octave chords on the rhythm guitar but the strings is more my style which is why I did it. But dude, try taking the string's chords and play the roots as 1/8 note chords on the rhythm in a high octave. It's a common technique.