This is it guys. My first song in a while that is truly my style. I think it is one of my best yet. I do have one big concern though, the transition (it's labeled) troubles me and if anyone could revise it i would REALLY grateful.
I'm gonna be pretty honest when I say your transition wasn't bad at all measures 125-129. I actually wasn't crazy about the two measures before the transition ironically. Maybe it was that tremolo note on the lead. I think your only trouble is the transition before the transition bro(123,124), but other than that this was REALLY GOOD material
yea you definitely needed that break before the verse, i actually have an idea for the transition, and two measures before, with your permission could I post it?
I don't know what to make of it. The song is GOOD. Thats for sure but its so strange. I couldn't really hear anything wrong with the transition. One thing I can say though, you really like using dive bombs and rises don't you. Reminds me of machine head.