I think you'll really like what I did here. Except the last riff I gave it more hardcore style drums because that was what I was feeling. Tell me if you like it because I'll change it if you don't.
The drums fitted perfectly...again. I do think those drums work well at the end. I want to ask your opinion on something though ROX. Should I use the verse intro riff as the chorus or something different?
It's whatever you want. If I were you though I'd do a measure to transition and then make a deadly chorus that was new. You can try to make it similar but with a variance. It's ultimately up to you though.