I really like the way this song is sounding, but I have one suggestion, the drums are alright, but they seemed slightly out of sorts measures 19-26 and 41 to 60 . I was wondering, with your permission, if i uploaded part of your song with slightly modified drums to see what you think?
This is really good stuff Dick (idk what other shortened name to give u x.x). Dub is right about the drums, they do need some revising. And as a game soundtrack, it would need a lot of loops during the climactic parts where all the tracks are playing. Just imagine if the player was in an intense fight and the song went back to the pizzicato strings part. It'd be out of place. Just remember to make a lot of loops at that point and you are set.
As a deathmetallist, I've been lead to think that some drums were made to "not fit" the song. I think that it should be taken in consideration, for cacophony sometimes sets a mood for fighting.