Track 2- Curse of the Reaper TuxGuitar tablature

I actually really like this but as far as telling you what and how to improve, i'm not exactly sure because this isn't a genre I play a lot with, but I like the sound.

dude this is your best song yet. granted i thought that bass intro is a little iffy because of the C being held out under the riff but it was very good. And I noticed that your soloing DEFINITELY improved. They were both great. And your main riff, the chorus riff, I think you should let the notes sustain, it might sound a little more evil. But I was amazed how much this improved. (Oh, and I told you a D5 chord was a good choice ;P)

If I were you, I would use that solo (72th measure), and expand it. Have short solos like this one here and there during the song will add life to it.

Thanks for the comments and thanks ROX for the advice. I'm starting work on Track 3 now it another drop song but faster. Hope it matches this one

well since you told me that my intro in till the end is the same as this one i toulted i check it out. I dont know man i didn't really like the song it was pretty bored and it had the same thing over and over aging