Pretty good but... The lead guitar in the intro can barly hear the riff it playing. And when it hit the pause i touled it didnt belong there but when it kick in to the riff right after the pause i love that riff. Stile dont think that pause belong there do should add a brige to easy in to the riff. and the riff at the end i just plane out didnt think it sound good or fit in the song. but overall it a good song
The riff around bar 40 gets repeated way too much. The leads are cool but yeah like PMR said work with the mixer to make levels equal because they are hard to hear. Some of the riffs I find pretty generic but I like the breakdown ending more than anything else I've heard of yours yet.