I've added a solo to it and stretched the song out a bit more, im not great at writing lead guitar and solos especially so let me know how playable it is or if its crap :P
Ewww, why hardcore? Can't you actually write real music? I'm sorry but I don't condone this type of music. Not to say it's bad, I just can't handle it.
Fair enough, I respect your opinion though I will say that I try to write different types of music and if you look at my other stuff iv put up on here you'l know that this is out of character for me. And yes I can actually write real music.
Shush MetallicaFan, I look at alot of music on here, I love hearing other musicians music. Just don't always like it, and if I don't I'll tell them. I'd expect the same from others.
@Enflamed, I'll check out your other stuff, for sure. I mean, for hardcore this is good, I just don't like the genre.