Great songwriting. Some nice riffs. Didn't like the breakdown though. Breakdowns are just so old now. Nearly every possibility as been done to death. I think if your gonna do a breakdown you should make some time signatures changes to keep them interesting. Would have been nice to see a solo too.
Great songwriting. Some nice riffs. Didn't like the breakdown though. Breakdowns are just so old now. Nearly every possibility as been done to death. I think if your gonna do a breakdown you should make some time signatures changes to keep them interesting. Would have been nice to see a solo too.
ChainsawVsGod - about it needing a solo, I just cant seem to write guitar solos. Im a guitarist myself and I can improvise solos easy, but whenever I try to write one down it doesnt ever come out right. Iv seen your stuff and its definately really good. Just wondering if you got some tips for me. Thanks.
smlint - Thanks Scuba! haha
Hmm. Well, by far the best way to make a solo is to just go around a scale. For example, your song is in C minor. If you go around that scale you can't wrong. Making a solo can be difficult and you can get confused, but just keep improvising until you find something good. Don't put any pointless guitar wankery in there. Try and make the solo have a purpose instead of putting in notes just for the hell of it. Be sure to include plenty of vibrato's and bends to give it some feeling.
Pretty good dude. I disagree with Chainsaw about the solo. I don't feel a solo from this song. And the breakdown is not a breakdown. I creates a climbing effect, breakdowns don't create suspense. I think its fine.